I am Thinking of You Always

Some writers can only produce if they pretend no one will ever read what they’re writing, if the story only exists in a perfect sphere of privacy. I am not one of those writers.

The very first sentence I wrote  for my own pleasure was created under the giggling, excited watch of my two best friends at age 14 — a fan fiction of a popular book series, in which our two favorite characters got married.

We shouted, squealed, and collapsed with laughter as I typed, typed, typed our way through the actual ceremony. They went home but I kept writing, exploring the wedding night, the morning after, changing dynamics in the group, and of course the obligatory dramatic pregnancy to top off this first foray into melodramatic writing. Did someone die at the end? Oh, you bet. And I collected my first gratified shrieks of, “You’re so evil!”

I read each chapter to them over the phone as it was written, because I had no floppy disks to transfer the story, and no internet with which to transmit it.

More stories soon followed, each first spoken over the phone, and then posted to FanFiction.net. Soon after I was posting the first chapters of Nameless to FictionPress, and you probably know the story from there.

I never wrote privately. There was —  is — always an audience present in my head, commenting, cheering, questioning.

I am lucky in that I’m not shy. I’ve been blessed with self-confidence; I am proud of my work. These invisible commentators are not critics — I do not falter under the weight of my own self-criticism. I am bolstered by this imaginary audience. They say the things to me that my readers have said over the years, expressing their love and support and leaping in excitement with me when something awesome happens.

So you see, reader… I am thinking of you always.

If I open the chapter this way, will you be confused? Here, let me put in a few sentences to orient you to what I’m seeing.

Do you understand who just said that? I don’t want to trip you up even for a moment; let me go back and add in a dialogue tag.

Did that revelation catch your breath? It’s not doing it for me, let me read it with your eyes and see how it flows. Yes, let’s make a paragraph break for added punch.  There, now you’ll feel what I feel.

I understand the need of some writers for privacy. But I’m not sure I would want it, or that I would do as good a job if I knew no one else would ever see it, not even the imaginary readers in my mind. If it’s just me, then my standards are lower. I don’t need to write the whole book, because I understand the context of my favorite scenes.

So I need these invisible commentators. I need the ghosts of readers past. You are my encouragement, my motivation, and the very mental space I occupy. I write for you, because of you, and with your needs in mind.

See you this evening,

<3, Savannah

3 thoughts on “I am Thinking of You Always

  1. Loie says:

    Aw, neat post. I need to buck up and get some self-confidence in my writing. I just began writing again after stopping for a few years….there’s a lot of work to be done and craft needed to be learnt….but am excited and encouraged to be moving on and getting better. Or so I hope ;)

    How is Nano coming along? Anything happen in the draft that’s surprised you? My main female lead totally surprised me – I didn’t expect her to be so spunky and blunt ! But that’s the fun of writing !
    Loie xo

    • Savannah Foley says:

      NaNo is going all right, but I knew I would come to a point where I had to slow down, and sure enough… I realized my MC is in a much darker place than I anticipated, as a consequence of dealing with all the bad stuff that happened in Book 1. So I’ m taking some time to explore that without worrying so much about hitting word count. If I make it, hooray, but if not, it’s been a wonderful, energizing experience anyway.

      Ah yes, the surprise snark! I had that happen to me in my zombie book! ‘Gosh Milani, you’re so much more snide than I expected.’ It’s totally fun, right?

      Are you keeping up on word count? I’m so glad for you that you’re writing again; NaNo is the greatest month to get back into it!

  2. Loie says:

    Hah! Love the snark! Whew, she threw me a loop but am following!

    The writing is going well :) I’m at 30,000 … I know a lot of it will be cut or revised, but man, it is so good to have nearly completed a novel. It will be my first time truly finishing a story – following it through to the end. A lot of the times I’d get stuck in the middle and stop writing. So am pleased because am currently in the middle and I still have an idea of where I’m going. Whoop whoop!!

    Go us ;) !!
    Loie xo

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